Personal development is the base for professional development. To what extent do you agree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today would is causal upsurge personal development is the base for professional development. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of cancers in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that yes I agree with the personal development is increase the professional development because whenever we read any books about business or mathematic so always increase the professional can not only contribute to so when we are free so read any books or novel or watch movie related with business and professional development is overall depend on personal development but also lead to numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to wide range of advantage it offers, not only can one benefits more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convince. Needless to say, all these merits stand one is good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence in concerned.
Overall is personal development is very important for increase the professional development and change the life style of personal development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... most conspicuous trends of today would is causal upsurge personal development is ...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the life style of personal development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08755760369 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94843737127 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566820276498 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.73777112 50.4703680194 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.0 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28020587859 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112515600014 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140453881063 0.071462118173 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226183481471 0.151781067708 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861138898089 0.0609392437508 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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