There is always going to be controvery over the issue that why modern people's lifestyle is not as healthy as the past. Todays, many people choose harmful diets and ful of stress jobs. Some believe that it is inevitable option of modern life. The following essay will discuss about reasons and solutions.
Beyond a shadow of doubt, todays food is not like before. Population of world have been increased and food is not sufficient for this amount. Scientists produce genetically modified food to overcome this problem. But this food is harmful for our body. After industrial revolution in eighteen century, humankind achieved lots of innovation and invented different appliances. These machines make our lives easy but at the same time, our health is in danger due to the shortage of exercise and mibility. Nowadays, all of us have washing machine and dish washer at home that cause to less activity. Most of us have a car that lead to walking and rising our blood pressure and cholestrol. All of them are the result of technology and modern life.
As we know, each problem has a solution. I believe to solve it, we need a worldwide campaign. We must choose our way. People must demand for healthy and organic food and do not buy harmful food like genetically modified food and with this way force producers to produce proper food. People must decide to do exercise to overcome diceases and avoid stress and tensions. It is our choise and decision.
From what has been discussed above, I restate my opinion that unhealthy lifestyle is result of modern technology and circumstances. It is somehow inevitable. However, for solving this problem we need the universal decision to reduce side effects of this new lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ntrovery over the issue that why modern peoples lifestyle is not as healthy as the past...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...After industrial revolution in eighteen century, humankind achieved lots of innovation ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94845360825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59108807997 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5904693829 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4545454545 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2272727273 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212365462011 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515456378439 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617264694914 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125950895762 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413051688499 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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