Dear Sir or Madam,
I writing to express my disappoint in the attitude of one your employees during my recent trip to Bangalore.
On the 5th of January, I boarded flight 253 from Chennai to Bangalore. I had made reservations well in advance and had chosen a vegetarian menu for my in-flight meals. However, a non-vegetarian meal was served to me in the flight. When I reported the incident to the air-hostess she was not apologetic about her mistake and insisted that I had not made the request in advance and she had run out of vegetarian meals. Further more, she did not make efforts to check in the pantry for any vegetarian snacks that can be served to me. I am a diabetic patient and it is crucial for me to consume food at appropriate intervals to manage my blood sugar levels. This incident had a drastic effect on my health for the whole day.
I am a frequent flyer on your airlines and I never encountered such an unsympathetic employee all these years. I would appreciate if you could provide adequate training to your employees about serving their customers. An impolite and indifferent attitude does not create a positive flying experience. I would appreciate if you could schedule a call with me sometime next week to discuss a compensation for the trouble I endured.
Looking forward to an amazing and memorable flying experience for my next trip.
Yours faithfully,
Rajie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir or Madam, I writing to express my disappoint in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80165289256 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87461967741 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4585485189 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142503768456 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466777350976 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339483731227 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819052997504 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479345801299 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.