This topic raises the controversial issue of whether "Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in
their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic
gain." Indisputably, economic growth ensures a secure and safe future.
Nevertheless, Nature is the most sybstantial thing we require for a healthy living.
Thus, i generally agree with the opinion that Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in
their natural state.
First of all, the natural world is an incredible wonder that inspires us all.
It underpins our economy, our society, indeed our very existence.
Our forests, rivers, oceans and soils provide us with the food we eat,
the air we breathe, the water we irrigate our crops with. I would like to point out that
there is NO LIFE without nature.To illustrate, let us look at aworls where there is no tree left,
all rivers are dried up, no fresh air to breathe. pixels taken from satellite would show
a concrete planet.In this circumstance,obviously you can not expect a life o earth.
Consequently, it is important some laws should be manifestated.
Furthermore, as we all are experiencing climate change which results in new weather pattern
which we are not accustomed to. Specifically, decrease in ground water level, extinxtion of sspecies like
rhino. Animals and plants that could be lost due to climate chnage. Statistically, since 2005, the caribean sea
has lost 50% of its corals, largely due to rise in temp of sea water.In India major "econimically"
well developed cities like kolkata,Delhi,
...... will run out of ground water, chennai is already facing it.
By 2020 4 degree celcious rise in temprature is expecte. which is an alarming situtation for huge number of species
which are on verge of extinctionHence. Hence all the evidence above demonstrates that ...
laws should be made to conserve nature.
Admittedly, economic growth is important. This is true when we consider development of the country and its people
. In addition, economic growth stabilises a country and provides employment opportunities
to the people. However, the above argument does not constitue sufficient support to priorities economic growth above
nature.
In conclusion, Industries tend to think about their personal growth, profit devastating ur mother nature
there should be sometging restraining them. Steming the decisions they make which eventually affect
nature. To maintain nature laws should be made. This could be done in an untamed society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48628428928 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14258189996 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625935162095 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0433760007 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6153846154 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4230769231 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.97078651685 583% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161235498696 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376375838665 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370531927465 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0382865294037 0.150359130593 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348154627566 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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