Technological advancement has revolutionized lives to great extend.It has improvised each and every aspect of life starting from education , medical , transport , etc.
I strongly opine that the accelerating rate in technology has brought more better life , My view point is supported by various perceptible facts , firstly let us consider the mode of communication.Gone are the days when people have to travel for days to see their family members,Smart phones has reduced the time from days to few seconds .Video Chat has enabled people to see them while talking, thus bringing the near and dear one closer while they are thousands of miles away.
Another remarkable feature technological advancement is in field of transportation.It is now feasible to travel thousand of miles , which was nightmare century ago. Aeroplane, helicopters , metro , bullet trains has not only made the long distance travl easier but has also improvised the day-to-day transport.
My opinon is further bolstred by the advancement in medical field.Varios digonostatic machines such as ECG, X-Ray , etc. helps in digonsing big disease easily .Better medical equipments , treatments method is another great factor
However , there are few negative aspects too.Though technology is helping us to great extend in our life but too much of everything is very bad.For example , human has become more lethargic and inactive with the excessive usage of gadgets hence impacting health.
Recaptulating , the above highlighted reason clearly justify that technogoical advancement has brought more good and by better over-sight and control use we can reduce the bad impact to great extend
- Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion. 61
- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems? 73
- In many countries, people have many health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how it can be solved? Give relevant examples from your experience. 78
- Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59126984127 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12048320783 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.929361476 49.4020404114 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.285714286 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136455991092 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622103229945 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527919330358 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690967381576 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517578795814 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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