The diagram below shows what happens to pollutants from farming and industry once in a river system
The diagram illustrates the process how pollutans are infecting water from farming and industry to river and ocean. There are two kind of pollutans to affect the water, nitrogen from feltilisers and heavy metals from industry.
To begin, two kind of chemical pollutans are absorbed by river plants. Heavy metals are floating in air and blowing anywhere then stick on the leaf of river plants so these river leaf receive heavy metals from the air. Meanwhile, nitrogen pollution came from fetilisers process on farming and surface of river bed is absorbing these nitrogen. In addition, these two process are namely nitrogen fixation.
Following this, the river is polluted by the mixture of nitrogen and heavy metal. Then it flows faster into the ocean where it is the end of water cycle in a river. The result is the ocean also polluted by nitrogen and heavy metals then may affect to non-hygienic rain fall namely rain acid that cause many kind of diseases spread widely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...ustry to river and ocean. There are two kind of pollutans to affect the water, nitro...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...ustry to river and ocean. There are two kind of pollutans to affect the water, nitro...
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Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this river' or 'these rivers'?
Suggestion: this river; these rivers
...en stick on the leaf of river plants so these river leaf receive heavy metals from the air....
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Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this nitrogen' or 'these nitrogens'?
Suggestion: this nitrogen; these nitrogens
...g and surface of river bed is absorbing these nitrogen. In addition, these two process are nam...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...c rain fall namely rain acid that cause many kind of diseases spread widely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, then, while, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93902439024 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37466926843 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2192427762 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194698898071 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953207130893 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076324512579 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149015216308 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551099190595 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.