Educators should take students' interests into account when planning the content of the courses they teach.
Education plays a vital role in country's economical, social development. Proper education for students would raise country to an extent level in all aspects. So students should learn what they want to learn and should get involved with the courses where they want to pursue their carrier. The auther claims that the educators should take students' interests into consideration when planning for the content of the courses they teach which sounds plausible and i mostly agree with the statement author said.
The educators are the people who knows exatly in which field or area the individual is good at, so they can guide the students where the students can pursue their carrier but they can not force an individual. Along with guidance educator should consider studens' interest in that area. There are lot of people in the world, who are successful in their carrier or top of that field, have chosen the area they are interested in for example Bill Gates, Sachin Tendulkar. Sachin was passionate about the cricket from his childhood days now he is the God of the cricket.
However, some students are misguided in thier opening phase of the education, they are forced by the teachers or the parents to study in the field where they are not interested in. For example. If the teacher sees the student is good at Maths then they will force him to learn to the math to make profit and advertisement even though the student is not interested in learning math. There is lot of difference between 'good at' and 'interested in'.
The parents and the teacher should support the students whereever they are interested in and should allow them to study particular field. If they pursue the education in their intersted field which will altimately increase their motivation towards work, also will increase their efficiency and which will produce the quality output and indirectly help in country's development in all the aspects.
To sum up, Statement provided by the author is true at some extent and i mostly agree with the statement until and unless student should allow the field of study to be chosen by their own interest with out any force.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...tudy to be chosen by their own interest with out any force.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90633608815 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45460883625 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2395519595 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.214285714 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346367721768 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118692085754 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115643503232 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188324881141 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122484054324 0.0667264976115 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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