Many affluent families send their children to private schools for better facilities and teaching methods that provide a holistic education. Some say that the this trend has a sever impact on the working class families that aspire to provide the best for their wards. Many individuals pay taxes to support universal education that their children do not avail. To a certain extent, I do understand the resentment from salaried individuals.
Undoubtedly, the quality of education that children receive in government run schools is deplorable. Firstly, the lack of funds towards facilities. For example, in a country like India many schools do not have the basic amenities such as a library, a play ground, and classroom. The money allocated is insufficient to build a good infrastructure at schools. Secondly, the teachers are not provided training adequately to make learning a beautiful experience for children. Innovative and creative approach to teaching can have a great impact on young minds.
Interestingly, despite the high tuition fee in private schools, parents are willing to admit their wards to such institutions. Firstly, the non-refundable admission fee that these institute charge is used to create a better facility. Secondly, the surplus cash flow can be invested in training the teachers and adopting innovate teaching methods.
In conclusion, although the quality of education in private institutes are better, the lack of funds is the reason for the inefficiency in running a government school. Hence, taxes that support universal education is very crucial for a developing country like India where many people are impoverished. However, the salaried employees bear the burden of tax and rising fees. In my opinion, the government should ease the burden of tax at least for the working middle class.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...ide a holistic education. Some say that the this trend has a sever impact on the working...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38811188811 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95344457498 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9025327849 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6470588235 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230795485104 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685932875909 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736400351289 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133810174846 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101861588334 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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