People are moving to urban area from rural area for better life. What are the advantages & disadvantages of living rural area and urban area?
The importance of people moving to urban area for better life from rural area was always a debatable topic. Many people state that people move to cities in order to achieve high standard of life. other reject this notion and argue that cities life more challenging and difficult, when compared to villages. In my opinion, latter proposition appears to be rational. so, this will elaborate both aspects in my upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are several reasons behind this notion but first and foremost is that people are moving to urban area for better employment and business opportunities which are less in rural area compared to urban area. Moreover, in search of better infrastructure, health facilities and improved education for their children. For instance, cities education is more advanced as compared to rural area and they will be provides best education who comes to rural area.
On the other hand, other argue that cities life more challenging and has its drawbacks . For instance, the cost of living higher than rural area, especially housing is very expensive. As a result homelessness is becoming more common in cities. there are also main problems of traffic congestion and some people do not manage their work and commit crime to survive. Besides this, more and more people moving in cities that’s why cities becoming overcrowded.
To sum up, mostly people want to live high standard life that’s why mostly people moving in cities. so, in my point of view government should provides better education and hospital facilities in rural area it will be more beneficial for rural area people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Other
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...other reject this notion and argue that cities life more challenging and difficult, wh...
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...ter proposition appears to be rational. so, this will elaborate both aspects in my...
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Suggestion: provides the best
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Suggestion: provide
..., in my point of view government should provides better education and hospital facilitie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13108614232 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60939108009 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520599250936 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2032361189 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477039377679 0.242375264174 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158149195101 0.0925447433944 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187565158069 0.071462118173 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324657407443 0.151781067708 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116499051053 0.0609392437508 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.