ones are aware about lay out leisure time activities.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have change more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals the lay out for leisure activities has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain leisure time activities regarding this I would say that it is a good to lay out for leisure time activities because it is also good for people life it has both side good or bad. Let's delve deeper about this in forthcoming paragraph.
Looking at the brighter side of the topic, ones are too aware about their life and daily routine activities. Firstly, masses are not free in their life but during their work they used some extra time for leisure time activities. Moving ahead, people maintain their life as a good way like they are using their time on such good activities like yoga, exercise, running, spend time with their family its all are beneficial for their health or their good relationships.
On the other hand, some of others think that it is just waste of time. There is one more error in the quiver people who are not serious about their lifestyle they think that leisure activities are not healthful. Moreover, no need for any outlining they can do these activities at their home . In addition, leisure time activities are used who are totally free and who have no work to do. Last but not least, people can do this type of activities just for fun or pass their time.
In conclude, I would like to say that it is really good for masses lay out for leisure time activities and make their health good or use this type of activities at their daily routines.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-07-16 | ritu sharma | 72 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 475, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ople life it has both side good or bad. Lets delve deeper about this in forthcoming ...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
..., running, spend time with their family its all are beneficial for their health or ...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the others') or simply say ''some others''.
Suggestion: some of the others; some others
...od relationships. On the other hand, some of others think that it is just waste of time. Th...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ey can do these activities at their home . In addition, leisure time activities ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65540540541 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41746152286 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469594594595 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.042701746 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290637986038 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117847895998 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736602286029 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186539032859 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544092403936 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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