With the rampant growth and revolutionary changes around the world. People are getting busy like never before. It is indisputably true that it is of paramount importance that young people should have the knack to orchestrate their professional and personal life. I feel the saying: " Failing to plan, is planning to fail".
There are have been many incidences when people have succumbed to despair due to lack of planning. For instance, many government offices have a hoard of pending documents and forms, which at times have even gone missing because of lack of strategy and improper agendas. Plotting the tasks and executing a deadline helps in achieving targets easily, ensures a smooth flow of work. Moreover, it builds up confidence and hence a healthy work-life balance. Just like a child, who studied since day one, wouldn't find a surprise test, "surprising".
The importance of planning and organizing has been known since the evolvement of mankind. Hence, attempts have been made to incorporate these skills in a person since his childhood. For Example, obeying a timetable or sorting and setting the study desk, Many schools also teach students to set up books in the library according to certain criteria. These little tasks aid in learning and imbibing these finesses so that huge tasks and duties are not intimidating for them in the future.
To sum up, I concur that young people should have the ability to plan and organize to succeed. Indeed, Bill Gates, Mukesh Ambani, Mark Zuckerberg, and many more wouldn't have been able to reach the heights they are now lacking these qualities.
- Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent to hospital.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- Writing task 1 (a letter)You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say– What and when did you borrow?– What happened to it? Why?– What do you suggest to 73
- Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how is should be celebrated.Write a letter to your friend.Say what type of party should be held e.g themed,fancy dress,black tie eventSuggest a suitable venueMake re 73
- In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner.Discuss both systems. 61
- Do you agree or disagree: young people should try many different kinds of jobs or career before they decide the long term career of their life. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15094339623 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81736465688 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6624776432 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235468607359 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723222234609 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720513721836 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140334653431 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425555495461 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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