some people like to trying new things to bring change in their lives and they enjoy it while few people avoid such things which make them changes in their routine life. Personally, I believe that change is inventible and it is must to achieved growth and new opportunities.
Every individual person have different mind set, some like to go with flow while others like to the same. Mostly, people like old age or those who belongs to rural areas are the people who avoid change in their routine life. They tend to be same their diet plan, living patterns, body languages and even thought process. It is very hard for them to justify their culture and tradition in other way. They mostly associated with very spiritual behavior and some blind belief of worship that they never like to change and they follow continuously to their ethics and expect from their son and grandson to the same.
On the other hand, people who believes in change are always eager and desperate for trying and attempt new things. They always ready to do new things than usual stuff, in way of food, fashion, opinions, beliefs, and so on. Such people are never allowed any generation gap between them and their guardians. They sick for new opportunities that brings positive or negative change in their lives. Being same can lead only to backyard of life while change can make easiness to fit in any environment. For instance; a student who study in higher secondary school where all modern gadgets are required to have and learn but belongs to a typical ancient family he can not put himself with others, he has to learn and earn the scores, otherwise, he might failed or underestimate. Thus, change is necessity in way of thinking to living style.
In conclusion, I reaffirm my opinion that every individual person have to walk with time. Change is low of nature, like every season change which brings so much happiness and prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some people like to trying new things to bri...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rings so much happiness and prosperity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78012048193 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38294514534 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545180722892 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3094958122 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339784074787 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11092094669 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780760688589 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209299285141 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948778465114 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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