۱- Which one do you prefer? Why?
– a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or – another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days.
Throughout history, a job has played a prominent role in all societies. Because it is of paramount importance, researchers have always searched a way to enhance the yield of work. A controversial question which is often raised this idea is that individuals select a career with less challenging, but it has more holidays or choosing a career with challenging and less vacation. I contend that a job with less challenging and has a lot of vacation is suitable for people. In the following paragraph, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first important factor to be mentioned is that free time has an important role in human life. To elaborate on my point, when people have adequate free time, they can spend time on their favourites activities. In this situation, an individual can spend time on sport, hobbies and many other items like that. Therefore, when she spends time for sport, she can improve body health. hence, she would prevent many diseases and also prevent stress and anxiety. Furthermore, I believe that people could spend much time with their family members and friends and improve relationships. But, if people do not spend adequate time with their children, their children would not grow in the best way.
Another reason is people would improve their wealthy situation. To shed more light, since people have free time, they can follow their favourite career. In other words, they can schedule for a second or part-time job, and do it when they have vacation and free times. Therefore, they improve their money situation so that they would follow their favourite activities and hobbies. Also, these parents who have a lot of money, prepare a better situation for their children, and they grow in the best situation. But, if people do not have free times, they could not open or select second or part-time jobs. In this situation, they would not improve their lifestyle and their situation.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that a job with less challenging but has more vacation is better than the other one. I believe that people with jobs that have an adequate holiday not only spend adequate time with their family members and for hobbies, but also they can choose a second job and improve the wealthy situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, therefore, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 7.30242825607 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 22.412803532 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1373.03311258 139% => OK
No of words: 388.0 270.72406181 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93556701031 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59968006362 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44587628866 0.540411800872 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 419.366225166 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4525550203 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1904761905 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4761904762 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 4.33554083885 415% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118781545648 0.272083759551 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458408162341 0.0996497079465 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685603382012 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109606606168 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800921416285 0.0443174109184 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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