These days it is widely argued that children are the targeted audience of toys and junk food advertisements. In-evidently some opine that the repercussions of this will be felt by both children and their family in the future. In my view, I completely agree that these advertisements try to lure young minds by making them believe that consuming fast food is healthy and owning a certain brand of toy gets you more friends.
Firstly, to begin with, advertisements display junk food as an essential and tastier source of nutrients rather than consuming home cooked food which children usually consider as bland and boring. Secondly, they also come out with exciting gifts and toys namely, McDonald's who give out complimentary toys on purchase of every happy meal. Lastly, they only advertise the nutritional value of their food and the unhealthy components are hidden for fear of sounding unappealing to their audience. Consequently, children fall prey to all these marketing gimmicks and are unwilling to listen to their parents when they try to inculcate healthy eating habits.
Moreover, advertisements for toys portray possessing certain items will automatically enable you to make friends and increases your social status among your peers. As a result, many children insist on buying the latest video games in order to be accepted by their friend circle. They turn adamant and stubborn and are unwilling to behave until they possess the toy. Eventually some get so addicted to their games that they cannot keep a track of time and are constantly glued to the screen, and hence parents have to resort to extreme measure like confiscating the toy or limiting screen time.
In conclusion, advertisements trick children into believing that fast food is beneficial and toys will elevate that status in society. They have an adverse effect on the minds of children which in turn affects them and their families.
- The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Your friend is taking an exam and has asked you to help him her with studying because he she knows that you usually do well Write a letter to your friend In your letter Tell him her how you study Give him her some advice about the week before the exam Exp 100
- Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city- Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city 73
- There are plans to build a new factory in parkland near where you live Write a letter to the local council In your letter give reasons why you are against the plans explain why the parkland should stay suggest what action the council should take Write at 74
- Your friend is taking an exam and has asked you to help him her with studying because he she knows that you usually do well Write a letter to your friend In your letter Tell him her how you study Give him her some advice about the week before the exam Exp 79
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14743589744 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75628353913 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6249988621 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304836775525 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107357004448 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475477067612 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200004258147 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528783738865 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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