You have recently attended a 90th birthday party of a close relative. It was successfully organized by hotel staff. Write a letter to the manager and say
– Describe the event.
– Talk about the facilities provided to guests, especially the elderly.
– Mention a particular employee whose service was great.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to the recently celebrated, 90th birthday party of my grandfather at the hotel's party hall. Since, it was a milestone celebration, the event was lavish with free flowing beverages and an open buffet.
Let me explain in detail. To begin with, we were pleasantly surprised with the decorations as well as the other arrangements. Secondly, since most of our guests were old, the venue was senior citizen friendly and even the food was not too spicy.
Lastly, the crew was very attentive and catered to all the requirements of the guests. However, I would particularly like to thank Jane. Being the planner, she ensured that the party was organized keeping the needs of the guests in mind. Additionally, due to her wit and humor there was never a dull moment and the crowd were in high spirits.
Please extend my gratitude to the hotel staff.
Yours Faithfully,
Mary Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, second, secondly, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89873417722 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65632843532 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708860759494 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6790863013 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184784674677 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578231998858 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511772734587 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106516548352 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538599167767 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.