You are going to leave your apartment in an English speaking country and your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during stay. Meanwhile, your friend wants to rent the flat after you.
• Write a letter to your landlord and Let your landlord know about your leaving
• Thank you landlord for his/her help
• Tell him/her about your friend
Dear Mr. Fernandes,
I am writing to let you know that I have to leave your apartment as soon as possible.
I am departing from Manchester for good. Lately, my dad is not keeping well and there is no family member to take care of him. Hence, I will be going to Lisbon, Portugal, to spend some finest moments with him.
Honestly, I appreciate your help during my initial period while settling down in the city. The immense support you extended by allowing me to reside without monthly rent was incredible. Thank you for allowing me to sow seeds in your backyard, which helped to continue my hobby of gardening.
Lastly, my childhood friend Pearl is keen to replace me in the same basement. She is a Portuguese too. I have given her your contact details; she may reach you through e-mail on this weekend. Hope you extend similar trust and faith in her as well.
Thank you again for the inconceivable support.
Kind regards,
Sebastian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Fernandes, I am writing to let you know that I have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, honestly, lastly, may, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73493975904 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51559225309 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710843373494 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1794755139 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4615384615 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7692307692 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27480657225 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802411314968 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809267366847 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130673289866 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111083964724 0.0580467560999 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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