Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Interaction between Men and women has transformed due to technology. This has majorly helped to strengthen the long-distance relationship. It has also been a negative change in the present world because of money laundering
Technology plays a major role to interact with many people, as this helps them to keep a strong relationship with people who are away. This is to say, because of the telephone and the internet, people get in touch with each other rapidly and as a result, they are able to toughen their relationship. For instance, in the United Arab Emirates, technology has a major impact on the expats because in the UAE 97% of people use social media platform to get in touch with their loved ones and as per the recent survey conducted by Emirates times disclosed that this helps them to keep their relationship firm.
Besides this, several people make use of this as a platform to ease the violence. In other words, many people use this for a negative purpose by leaking important statistics about a nation with other people who could lead to foul play. However, advanced technology has been introduced to overcome such situations. For example, as per a recent survey conducted by The Emirates Times disclosed that the second nation in counter-terrorism was awarded to UAE and the entire credit goes to the latest technology called counter-attack.
In conclusion, technology plays a vital role in the interaction between people around the globe. This has an immense effect on the humans which helped them to grow their relationship stronger and it has also affected negatively to the nation by simplifying terror between people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04395604396 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8759454569 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1409200985 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.181818182 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331810201733 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130435646823 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077536428185 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194709167088 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422527409797 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.