You want to sell your bicycle. Your friend has told you that his cousin might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend’s cousin. In your letter
explain why you are selling the bicycle
describe the bicycle and how much it will cost
suggest a date when your friend’s cousin can come and see the bicycle
Dear Ankur,
I am writing to inform you that I have decided to sell my biclycle, which is only one year old, because I am moving to Canada next week. As I am moving to a new country, I have to vacant my current rented property before departing for Canada. Your cousin, who is my best friend, told me that you are interested in buying it.
Buying sports items has been my favorite hobby for quite a long time, and bicycle is one of my collections that I bought one year back. It has four speed gears which boost the speed of bicycle and help to burn more calories. It cost me about $100 and I would like to sell it at half of this price.
Usually, I am free on weekends but if you want to see bicycle on weekdays then I will be available after 8:00 PM in the evening. Moreover, if you would like to discuss anything prior to our meet, please feel free to call me on my mobile number 98765567878.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Your faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: one-year-old
...ided to sell my biclycle, which is only one year old, because I am moving to Canada next wee...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: PM_IN_THE_EVENING[1]
Message: Use simply 'PM'.
Suggestion: PM
...ays then I will be available after 8:00 PM in the evening. Moreover, if you would like to discuss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26315789474 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30442186042 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7777712418 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255532426 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105579710064 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098431939677 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131788106414 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051039727784 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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