britain
The passage stated that studying and uncovering old artifacts faced too many problems in Britain, hoewer, the lecure dissagrees with this.
First, the reading part said that there are meny artifacts that were lost during to construction of new buildings and villages. atahere were found many valuable sites, but they didnt save them, they continue working. The lecure oposes it by saying that they need to be examine by archaelogist before the construction and they can build them in the other side ehere can be save.
Moreover, the passage stated that archaleologists felt that their job was not paid well. Changing goverment priorities brought to periodic reductions in funding. The lecure on the other hand, stated, the workers needs to be paid by the companies and not by government. She said this needs to be rule, that construction compaines are responsible to make the payment.
Finally, the author thinks it is difficult to have a career in archaelogy,but the proffesor desputed it by saying that this created a lots of paid work than before. Archaleologists neds to do the research, process the data, write reports and so on, so this lead to highest paid work ever.
IN summary, there might be too many lost archaleologist things, but if they were more careful if would be save.
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- It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- It is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it than to choose jobs that they enjoy but come with low salaries Use specific reasons and examples 70
- glass and birds 73
- britain 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Atahere
...truction of new buildings and villages. atahere were found many valuable sites, but the...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ere found many valuable sites, but they didnt save them, they continue working. The l...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...difficult to have a career in archaelogy,but the proffesor desputed it by saying tha...
^^^^
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...desputed it by saying that this created a lots of paid work than before. Archaleologis...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, well, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 216.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98148148148 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77332977208 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4799479988 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.8181818182 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0416731184867 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0164260802456 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519438266048 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0361373765403 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722747530807 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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