There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a great evidence for the rising usage of cars. Rising global warming and other effects on human’s health and well-being are viewed as a potential problem caused by increasing use of automobiles. This easy will discuss why more usage of cars has led to rise in temperature of earth and created a lot of problems to human health.
More usage of cars has created an impact by rising the earth’s temperature as they release a lot of toxic gases. They release gases like carbon-di -oxide, nitrogen etc. Especially carbon-di-oxide has a major role in contributing to the global warming because they do not allow the essential gases to show their presence. They dominate all other gases. It does not give space to oxygen as a result which increased the heat in the atmosphere. These gases will not allow the trees to occupy their space and as a result all the tress are gone in vain. After the loss of trees, there was reduction in the amount of rain as they are correlated to each other. Overall, it illustrates that release of toxic substances reduce rainfall level which leads to the rise of heat in the earth.
People’s physical health and well-being is also being damaged a lot, as there are no activities to the body expect the way the humans tend to move from place to place. But nowadays even these are being replaced by automobiles which has initiated the growth of diseases. Lack of physical activity has ruined one’s life by making a person become overweight. Obesity is one the important and base reason for lot of problems like heart attack, pressure etc. These are all dramatically growing as the days pass by because there is minimum contribution given by the movable body parts.
To conclude, I strongly agree that the rising usage of vehicles has played a major role in rising global warming and by also having unwanted effects on human’s and their well-being as they release a lot of toxic gases and reduce the need for physical activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...educe the need for physical activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8221574344 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67075762779 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504373177843 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0101134695 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2941176471 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11764705882 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178585015554 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536392342235 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646043666873 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119522414723 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555300112145 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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