Air pollution is one of the major concerns in the world right now and it has been evident that private cars contribute a large portion to it. Protecting the environment either from global warming or from pollutions is in anyone hand and I shall discuss my views on tackling this issue.
Citizens of many countries over-relied on cars by considering the expenses of public transport. So, it is the time for bureaucrats to come front and to reduce the fares of public transport. This move could encourage the public to commute by buses or trains rather in cars. On top of this, the network of public transport has to be extending to both rural areas and suburbs too. On the other hand, daily work commuters could use the flexibility of car-pooling technique if they wish to travel only in cars. This could drastically reduce the pollution level. To make this happen, I suggest to the organization to conduct weekly awareness sessions within the company.
We now have sophisticated technology available and that lead to the invention of electric cars. Government and electric cars manufacturers should start giving subsidy to the buyers of electric cars. By promoting these kinds of cars can reduce the carbon-dioxide levels in the environment. Like the gas stations, electric charging points should be made available throughout the country.
Apart from these, engineers and scientist can use the latest technology to re-modify the existing car engines, so that it emulates less pollution.
To conclude, dealing with air pollution is in the hands of every human being and we should start looking at other alternative approaches rather using private cars. Improved public transport, car-pooling and electron cars are few of them. In order to reduce the levels of pollution, both government and citizens should work hand in hand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'hands'.
Suggestion: hands
...warming or from pollutions is in anyone hand and I shall discuss my views on tacklin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, apart from, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8104151532 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2528131924 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.9411764706 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218299109881 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683414016089 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420121698274 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111924048986 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264676154693 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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