More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers an their families but other think it will being stress to the home. Discuss both the view and give your opinion
With the advancement in information technology sector it has led to invention of laptops and other technical devices which allows people to work from their home. Although, the pressure to work at any time during a day results into in family. However, the merits associated with it outweigh the disadvantage.
Undoubtedly, working from house has drastically increased the pressure on the employee, as they are expected to work at any hour of the day. Eventually, people are unable to keep up the equilibrium between the personal and profession life. The timeline for task completion are more stringent if a person has to work from their home, so people are unable to cope up with their family responsibilities.
Moreover, the perks associated with work from home cannot been overlooked. First of all, the employees can work at their own flexibility. This means, people can do their household chore and other family responsibility and afterward concentrate on office work. Furthermore, earlier the time been spent on traveling reduced and utilized for house task.
In addition, work from house has been boon to all the working women especially the ones from nuclear families, as they can simultaneously take care of their children and do their job. Also parents who are on maternity leave can start to work earliest if provided with the facility of working at their own pace from house.
To recapitulate, the demerits of working from house cause disturbance in personal an professional lives. The advances such a flexible working hours and taking care after of their infants definitely outweighs the demerits.
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... allows people to work from their home. Although, the pressure to work at any time durin...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... disturbance in personal an professional lives. The advances such a flexible work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, as to, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22988505747 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92070651778 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55938697318 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0185419618 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248289922148 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092073535972 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634201822061 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149336765441 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435178859441 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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