Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Nowadays, the pollution and traffic problems are growing and the best way to solve it, the government require to augmentation the price of petrol. Definitely, I agree to cast a vote for it seeing that some impacts of this method will there few mark-up and make people careful to construct decision.
On the one hand, increase the charge of benzine will build community mindset change. Moreover, this limitation purpose to reduce the transportation purchasing power and the reign has to offer other solution such as take the public transport facilities, using electric-powered transportation or pedaling a bicycle to go to work and others tender which do not use the petrol. Indeed, this subtraction in gasoline, community and the ministry may establish new wisdom and produce the innovation to safe their environment then invent the fresh air. Accordingly, health will be created for everyone and achieve the comfortable air atmosphere without poll
In other one hand, all of transportation has need out of energy from fuel and in case, the society does not matter about the consequence by the dangerous of gas contamination from theirs vehicles. Whereas, even though the gasolene has expensive costs, will not affect people who are wealthy and the community under faction likely to feel partiality. Extremely, this policy prone to conflict in the colony. Therefore, justice should as well be considered for this kind of provision.
In the inference of direction to forwards, the local endorsement are indispensable. Lastly, deliberation and conclusion for mitigate the discoloration be necessary to balanced with optimal solution and the positives-negatives influences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, lastly, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17324660067 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662835249042 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8325177959 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107036586849 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407839808899 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892752064785 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695939343503 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856722715466 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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