The graph compares the average doing exercise proportion of both genders in Australia in 2010.
Overall, Female tended to do more regular physical activity than Male after 25 years old. Meanwhile, the Proportion of male doing exercise was only more than Female before 25 years old.
According to the given chart, Male just did exercise more than Female from 15 to 24 years old with 52,8%, then dramatically fell down in the next group, 25 to 34 by 42,2%. After that, Male still kept decreasing marginally to 39,5%, the lowest point in the chart before increasing continuously in 3 remaining groups and achieved almost as equally as Female in the last group, 65 and over, by 46,7%.
Turning to the next sex, Female started with 47,7% in 15 to 24 group, was lower than male of the same ages. However, they increased constantly and kept higher than men in other groups; Particularly from 45 to 54 years old, women reached the peak by 53,3%, compared with men just 43,1%. Subsequently, women nearly levelled off then dropped down in 2 next groups, remained just 47,1% in 65 and over age group but they were still modestly higher than male with 46,7%.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 78
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Task 2: Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negativedevelopment?Give reasons for your answ 78
- Internet Users as percentage of population 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...remaining groups and achieved almost as equally as Female in the last group, 65 and over, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3898953952 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4742199525 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131558431457 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612490806127 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323328693496 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743769856664 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256358738025 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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