Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantages
Nowadays with the increasing production of goods people are tended to casting their elderly things and adjusting to others . this essay will discuss both sides of this problem and consider the economic side as a beneficial one and the pollution as a negative one.
throwing away a big amount of things will cause several problems regarding pollution and extinction of flora and fauna. Rarely do people realize about consequences of such actions. For example , by casting old things , there is appearing a need of production new ones for people , hence it will bring an overexplotion of natural resources.Furthermore , throwing away elderly things in ocean will have a negative effect on condition of flora and fauna . The more vegetable life will die out , the more water animals will suffer from this and in the end they will be finally eliminated. Moreover , considering the fact that fishes are being used as the main food in coastal provinces , it is needless to say that such extinction will exacerbate the situation for those who live there.
On the other hand economical benefit should also be considered by regarding this issue. it is evident that manufacturing new goods contributes to the appearance of annual proficiency for country . it can be easily exemplified by the fact that majority of markets sell their production and the taxes from these selling are going to be in government's charge and governments themselves have an opportunity to improve living standards of dwellers. For instance , a recent survey reported that the average level of living has significantly increased within 7 years in UK on the grounds of providing a big campaign of production goods.
In conclusion , manufacturing things can be advantageous for government as well as baleful for ecosystem in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1724137931 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05302322878 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8242002277 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164218868782 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637053449317 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655163534708 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969781894689 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469828291569 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.