You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
• say what the problem is
• describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
• ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Sir,
My name is Tina, I am studying short course in York University, Canada. I am coming from India to study this course for my higher education. I am writing this letter to inform that the accommodation you have provided is noisy, next to my room there is gym for men and it is working 24 hours a day. They play music or songs all time in high volume which is effecting my studies. I already have complaint about this issue to the security of locality, but nothing has changed.
I never thought that this issue will come on my way and impacts my studies badly. Before coming here I assured that this accommodation is not a hostel but a private place to live, thus it will be quiet and clean all the time. Unfortunately, it is not true and I already have tried my best to stop this problem.
Therefore, I would request you to please take some steps immediately against the gym club or change my residence to somewhere countryside. I need to finish this problem as soon as possible to continue my studies smoothly.
I hope you will understand my problem and take some productive actions
Yours sincerely,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, My name is Tina, I am studying short cou...
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...problem and take some productive actions Yours sincerely, Vishal
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... productive actions Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Suggestion:
...ve actions Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55665024631 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61546202561 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.828074012 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0909090909 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137070655871 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574495169594 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465675917607 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777715093938 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286910365632 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.