You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,•say what the problem is•describe the acc

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You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.

Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,

• say what the problem is

• describe the accommodation you thought you were getting

• ask the provider to solve the problem

Dear Sir/Madam ,

In this letter i am conveying you about my problems that are because of accommodation you provided.

The room was plenty of mosquitoes and there is no proper lightning and ventilation and the bed is also not in good condition and the area where I am living is not hygienic .

I thought I will be getting a high-class bedroom and full of ventilation and air conditioner and attached bathrooms . I imagine the community I where I would live will be full of peace and be easily to read.

But It was totally different here there is no water in washroom and no housekeeping and leakages from wall.

I Hope u could please solve the issue that I am facing by changing my locality into an awesome environment where I can survive without any difficulties with excellent condition of place I am living.

I am looking forward for your reply with proper answer to me

Thanking you

Yours Obedentially

N.B.Muralidhar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91925465839 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95507206715 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658385093168 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.564256305 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110562588866 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497408305591 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061821298363 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549188227066 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583569174894 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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