These pie charts analyse the main difference in the population of Yemen and Italy in three different categories (0-14,15-59 and 60+) of age groups in year 2020, and discuss how population will alter in the year 2050 percentage wise.
Overall, at the beginning of the period 60+ years citizen of Yemen and 0-14 age group population of Italy covered smaller section whereas 15-59 years will cover greater part of inhabitants.
As given in the pie charts of Yemen, more than 50 percent of population(50.1%) was occupied by 0-14 years age group in 2000 whereas 60 and above years age group cover 3.6 per cent of total population. Similarly, remaining of the population (46.3%) was dwelt by 15-59 years age group. While making projections for 2050 of Yemen population, it is predicted that the population from 0-14 age group downfall by 13% to the figure of 37% whereas the population of 15-59 years age group is projected to be increased by 21% standing with 57.3%. The population of old age people is also negligibly by 2.1% to the figure of 5.7%.
In other hand, greater section of population of Italy was 15-59 years slightly above 60% while 0-14 years of residents were 14.3% people with ages 60+ were found to be roughly 25%. In 2050, the prediction was made number will increase by approximately 20 percentage of 60 years and above (42.3%) while in the same time nearly 15 percent of citizen will be decreased aged 15-59 (46.2%). In the mean time, it was hoped that 0-14 yeas of age group population will decrease by close to 3% to fall in 11.5%.
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 67
- [Revised essay for the following topic]The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where 67
- The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 61
- [Test 3- Cam 9] The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71217712177 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.555733516 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490774907749 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9048196481 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.888888889 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155134345762 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860794763014 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049898945275 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113728352519 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481646272309 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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