You stayed at a hotel last week. After you get home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter
-explain what happened to your watch
-describe your watch
-ask the manager to help you find it
Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing you in regard to the property I had left in your hotel. It is gold watch with my name on it.
To begin with, I arrived and checked in on 22nd of July and spend in this hotel two nights. Unfortunately, I had to leave for my hometown in a hurry and I forgot my watch in the room 25. This watch was bought a week before my business trip and it was a quite expensive purchase. You can imagine how stressed and upset I was when I realized that I lost them.
I am sure that I left them on the bed the in the hotel room. I would be grateful if you could look for my property and send me it by express post as soon as possible. Please, wrap it carefully and sent as valuable item. Thank you for your time and consideration.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your faithfully,
Annie Kim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ul if you could look for my property and send me it by express post as soon as po...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09696969697 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36073876802 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3348409639 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.3333333333 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32166959553 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111764520722 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880240920512 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202501359653 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092291523546 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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