Some people say that a country should produce food locally, while others believe that it is good to import food. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
A significant number of people believe that food must be produced in their home country. Whereas, others do not agree and consider the import of food is better. In my opinion, I completely disagree and believe that local food production is low in cost and improve the employment of the nation.
Firstly, local production of grains involves majorly cost of farming and distribution to local areas as compared with the imported food which involves taxes, international transportation charges and other labour expenses. Therefore, more production of local food always benefits the nations in terms of inflation. For instance, India is known for the production of cotton in high yield and the purchasing cost of cotton in India is very low as compared with other nations.
Secondly, more production of food means more farming on local land, which directly impacts the employment level and benefits locals in terms of business and job. Hence, the government should promote local farming and encourage their people to do farming. For example, 50 per cent population of Indonesian population are involved in farming directly or indirectly.
On the other hand, imported food products mean storage for longer durations and the shelf life can be maintained through preservation methods, this preservation step required chemicals which may have side effects for a particular population. Hence, I believe that we should focus more on local production of food items.
In conclusion, the imported food has no benefits for the human population, unlike local food. The regional food is more appropriate in terms of consumption, cost and improves employment figures of a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34848484848 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85591993866 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526515151515 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1766457993 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217186535602 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102950868286 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710815091268 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150539481098 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933858267204 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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