Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways. You agree or disagree with the statement. Support your answer with examples.
The originality word used in anywhere, anytime and it used for anything which about places, people, products, thoughts, etc. But, there are two approaches about which one is the well-thought. The first thougth is thinking something that was never before, and the second is that putting old ideas together in new ways. I think it depend on when, where and why is used.
First of all, today there are many car types and models in the world, and their types increased day by day by car companies and factories. All of these companies, consider new ideas which about the comfort, and an economy which about consuming gas down. And, some parts fo these companies would make their cars with the traditional concept. In car environments, using that old concept named the originality.
Also, the new creations and explorations in sciences, math, and the biologic environments are an important because these things always cause new solutions on some their problems. Let's think diseases. There are many disease in our world, some of them impact badly and harshly, doctors and medical scientist consume their times a lot, and they concentrate their problems sharply. When the solution came in need It would be the originality.In addition, the original word is used some countries for the stupid and a fool person who causes comic issues.
Moreover, there are diverse kinds of product names in the communities, the most parts of them have their reputations given by people of the worlds. And, some of them have a high brand name than other. Then, when people want to take anything which about their wonderings they prefer the high reputations' ones. For example, Coca cola company, that company may have the highest reputation in the world, because their productions formulas not known by other companies, ant Its products' taste more delicious than others. And, It uses the original word on their all products.
In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons, I definitely do not agree both of these statement. Because the originality neither new ideas about thought nor putting old ideas together in new ways, I think that depend on their using areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03921568627 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56347365626 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.463337944 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6842105263 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164513485729 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058260800479 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973738670428 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117087259377 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101981227475 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.