Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should encourage their students to question everything. Use examples and reasons to support your position
All Teachers are always been an important in all traditional or modern education systems.They often interested in their students in schools where they work or other parts of their student's life.And they should interested in their students because young members usually make failure.
First of all, there are many difficult issues in school environments.All students have to make their decisions effectively, and they should be better thinking abilities which about decisions such as choosing good friend or girl friend.
Also, young students have to select their lessons in their school, such as mathematic, science, biology etc.Most of all of these titles are important and choosing them is difficult.However, students do not have ample ability for selecting them.So, they should take true lessons.
In addition,family of students want to receive teacher thoughts for their children who studying in school.Because families are always be worry for their offspring, and they think that if teachers effect their children's behaviours or decisions they always be in good conditions.So, the most of the parents urge their children's teachers.
In my opinion, taking account of all reasons, teachers should encourage their student to question everything which about lessons, behaviours, doing sports or any other activities.Because, this situation is necessity, that must be in every time and everywhere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 211.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68246445498 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12788309537 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.0901798121 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 239.8 100.406767564 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.2 20.6045352989 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8 5.45110844103 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188970120545 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116208174321 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034250763079 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116208174321 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034250763079 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 11.7677419355 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 58.1214874552 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.1575268817 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 10.9000537634 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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