As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Mankind has made remarkable advancements in the field of technology. Technology has not only made our lives easier but has made us somewhat dependent on it. Various discoveries throughout history like Computers, Refrigerators,Cars,Mobile phones has been a boon to us.The greatest discovery of all times” the Internet” is a major part of our lives nowadays. Internet has brought the world closer than we ever expected.Anything and everything in the world is only one click away.From North to South, East to West, Earth to Space ,all the information around the world is easily accessible from our homes. We no longer need to plan a trip to libraries and dust off the old books in order to find something. And this is not the end. Further innovations in technologies such as Robots are not only ready to replace humans as workers but are believed to better at the job in comparison to humans. Robots provide skilled manpower, don’t get tired, are easily replacable,require no income but they fail to bring creativity to the table. Sure we can teach a robot to kick a ball, walk in a straight line but it’ll always lack ethics and creativity.Technology has made the tedious things easier for us like calculations: it has eliminated errors, has made long calculations trivial.However even today technology has failed to solve various world problems like poverty,global warming,economic crisis,unemploynment etc. we still look up to our leaders and politicians for the solution of these problems. Technology sure is a tool we use,but it’s not the solution of everything.Until we’re able to create an ideal world the human mind keeps on learning and moving on to newer things every day. It’s our imagination and creativity which has led us to the world we live in today and we can rely on it for the upcoming times too.A human mind never stops thinking,even involuntarily our mind is analyzing things.With the help of a powerful tool like technology with the creativity of human mind we are yet to achieve greater heights. In conclusion,Techonology is an asset for mankind but not a replacement of human mind.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11142857143 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60312336164 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.245556714 60.3974514979 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.615384615 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113696877554 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399061012506 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392720607206 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113696877554 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.