Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Other disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinions.
The world has changed and there are no many new things to spend the cash on. This is an era of technological advancements and internal is the massive source of information. Teenagers already know where they want to spend their money and prefer cash than presents. Though, there are always some guests who prefer to gift something valuable and useful after a lot of consideration but think that young people can’t handle a lot of cash and may end up spending it somewhere they shouldn’t. However, we also find some liberalists who’d just gift some cash away with liberal thoughts. This essay will evaluate both views and their impacts on teenagers’ lives.
As people are at their young age are often rebellious and makes decisions without giving away many thoughts, therefore, it might not be suitable to hand over the cash and not keeping a check on them. However, parents should ensure that they aren’t interfering a lot in their children’s personal lives and are giving them enough space.
Even though, presenting money as a gift may be the best gift in the eyes of a minor but it doesn’t decimate the fact, presenting any useful goods are useless. Gifting away the commodities have their own benefits if they are given after considering the needs of the youth and the biggest benefits among all is that receiver remembers you while using that item and it becomes a symbol of love, while this is not the case with giving away cash.
In essence, money cannot be the best gift as it may be used in any wrong direction by youths. However, if it is being received as a gift, it’s parents’ duty to keep a track of that. Receiving different products and letters written out of love still remain the best gifts as they show true affection and care towards the receiver and become beautiful memories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
The world has changed and there are no many new things to spend the cash on. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87619047619 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71859121995 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4100023842 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156602602096 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564138100527 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364802713817 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934459971962 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238477692194 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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