The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.
The pie chart gives survey information about the number of persons traveled to four different vacation spots(Museums & Galleries, Historic houses & Monuments, Wildlife parks & zoos, finally theme parks) in Britain during the year 1999.
Overall, People visited more Theme parks among the four spot also the museum and galleries were visited slightly lower than this. It is observed less interest has been shown to the other two categories, which accounts only quarter of the total tourist's numbers. Particularly Blackpool pleasure beach hit a high percentage of interest in amusement parks.
Firstly with regards to the theme park it stands at a peak value of 38% out of this Blackpool pleasure beach visited by 47% of people which is more and then Alton towers viewed by 17% and also the Pleasureland situated at Southport attracted 16%. Finally, the Chessington world and Legoland visited by least around 10%.
Likewise, approximately 37% visited Art Galleries marks the second highest attracted spots in overall. Historic houses & monuments(16%), wildlife parks(9%) combined makes only quarter of the total tourists in 1999. It is observed only the top two strike a 75% peoples popular choices for their trips that makes around three fourth of total.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Historic
...ferent vacation spotsMuseums & Galleries,Historic houses & Monuments,Wildlife parks & zoo...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Wildlife
... & Galleries,Historic houses & Monuments,Wildlife parks & zoos,finally theme parks in Bri...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , finally
...houses & Monuments,Wildlife parks & zoos,finally theme parks in Britain during the year ...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...s were visited slightly lower than this.It is observed less interest has been show...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
...hich accounts only quarter of the total tourists numbers. Particularly Blackpool pleasur...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...nd situated at Southport attracted 16%. Finally the Chessington world and Legoland visi...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...egoland visited by least around 10%. Likewise approximately 37% visited Art Galleries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47150259067 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9259105175 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668393782383 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6230636575 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210766209401 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763990280861 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497677639078 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11744575731 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323218222 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.