Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree?
Generally, shops in any city have a main source where one can buy tradition or imported food items. Only Local food items should be sold on them, and avoid to offer other countries food products. I agree with that statement because it would enhance the importance of local food and positive impact on economy.
To embark upon, to keep the existence of tradition food item is very necessary for the culture. Today we live in that era where cut throat competition are at peak where variety of food products are available. So only local store has a potential to maintain importance of tradition food items by only offer that items at their shops. According to The Times, for example, multinational super stores are providing numerous of the foreign food products, people are willing to buy that products instead of local made food items.
Moreover, purchasing of the local made food items in stores might be positive in term the economic situation of country. If that items are sold more than the imported one, the production will be increased of local food items. There will be more jobs available on market because of high demand of production of local food. For instance, it is recorded that when one food company was opened in Pakistan, they just imported the food item instead of making it in Pakistan, causes many local company to close their production unite because local people want to buy foreign products.
To sum up, stores and shops try to offer only local made food products to people instead of brought food products from other countries, so it would be beneficial for the local food and for the economy of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid offering'.
Suggestion: avoid offering
... food items should be sold on them, and avoid to offer other countries food products. I agree ...
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Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... sold on them, and avoid to offer other countries food products. I agree with that statem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82624113475 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42104069698 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485815602837 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9809660677 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.416666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440709342689 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198426724569 0.084324248473 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688325221273 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317460012227 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243141409988 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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