Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Views differ considerably when it comes to the issue of teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past or nowadays, we find that some people hold the idea of teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past meanwhile others prefer to teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the nowadays. As far as I concerned, it is more advisable to choose to agree the statement rather than to disagree the statement. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
First of all, it is important to consider that parents. Certainly, there may be some perspectives that I neglected to fully consider. However, in most case, parents want their children to have great experience in the school. To illustrate this idea let us consider the following example that the parents will require the teacher, although every detail in the school.
Secondly, the equal importance is that the children. Of course, for some people, there may be an argument to be made for other positions. However, it would to fair to say that for most people it will be which the children know their parents will support then, no matter what they are doing. Take a case of Sam, a friend of mine whom I have known him for 10 years, his child is ten grades student. Sam love his child so much, so give him a lot of thing. This caused his child became a bully in school. This is a good example showing that parents need carefully to teach the children.
Finally, I will be first to admit that the society. Despite of possibility, I prefer to maintain my stance for this argument. By way of example, I can remember that what I watched the news,and I figured that the society is more carefully detected the teacher. I think that this is the case for many other people as well.
By way of conclusion, based on the argument explores above, when advantage and disadvantage of teacher value by society are carefully compared, the most striking view is obvious. Not only cause by the people, but also cause by the society. That is why everyone will do the same statement.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...Sam love his child so much, so give him a lot of thing. This caused his child became a bully i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...an remember that what I watched the news,and I figured that the society is more care...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, i think, of course, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63315217391 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55027282493 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502717391304 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.3819061422 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1904761905 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5238095238 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244289130323 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495847197594 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896681351181 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131297541191 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142318629569 0.0645574589148 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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