Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence in young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position.
As a social being, we are always surrounded by friends and families. We are born and grow up among these people, so they are very close to us. Some people believe that friends are the most influence in young people. However, I believe that family members are the one who play the significant role in young people’s lives. I feel this way because parents and relatives teach us rules of a society, they inspire us to succeed in our goals, and love us unconditionally.
To begin with, our family always has a great impact on us to shape our future lives. Our parents always give us information ab...
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I believe that family members are the one who play the significant role
I believe that family members are the ones who play the significant role
rules and behaviors that is accepted in our community.
rules and behaviors that are accepted in our community.
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