It is certainty True that museums play and at the most important part for the purpose to educate everyone. Some people think that museum should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museum is to educate but in my prospective there are plethora of reason with the help of which we can say that museums Have something not only something but also are hugeSource of education.
Firstly in the present era people are not paying attention On history so that they could introduce search these things to their next generation.Children can boost their own knowledge About the History like how their ancestors used to live in their era.Thought,Children’s have a Creel city to know about the history in the of the ancient age,By these places they can satisfy their trust and get solution.
Secondly, museum is the place where we can easily get the knowledge about weapons old clothes of kings who have fought for their freedom By using instruments which were available in their age.These things are not available easily at Bookstores.
Thirdly, we can get knowledge about various types of aspects like an instrument which are used to play in the old period moreover so many things can feel originally at one place.
On the other hand, we can make the best use of our free time in museum. Parents can go to the museum along with their children is just for the Purpose of picnic to Rejuvenate theirself.
What is more,It is new source of enjoying as well as knowing the various aspects of our history with a special way and we can use maximum utilisation of our time to educate our children.
As resulting museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people so that the people can have an attachment with the history and should be improved so that children could be attracted with this place and their intelligence could be improved .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as well as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 4.92783505155 325% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 937.175257732 166% => OK
No of words: 322.0 206.0 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83229813665 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81822528793 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487577639752 0.622605031667 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 290.88556701 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 16.3608247423 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.055540285 44.8134815571 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.888888889 76.5299724578 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.7777777778 16.8248392259 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5555555556 4.34317383033 335% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236778570203 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117900449775 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121884381699 0.0603063233224 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125053887041 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129361582008 0.0580467560999 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 8.37731958763 229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 8.54432989691 187% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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