You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to companyComplaining about thisGiving your reasonsAsking for bill to be changed | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed

Dear Sir/Madam,  
 I am writing this email to express my disappointed with the October's bill for my cell phone, as it mentioned some pending payments on my line during my annual vacation. 
 Honestly, I've left my personal mobile at my home between the 29th of September till 1st of November, and I can certainly, assured you that no one used my mobile at that time. However, I shocked when I went into your company in order to pay what I thought that only monthly fees, but the employee informed me that there are several international calls have been made in October, during my holiday. I can send you a copy of my flight details and hotel reservations to prove my absence during that time.  
 I would like therefore to double check the provided invoice again, and revise it as soon as possible, since my mobile line has been suspended due to such error and a plethora of business calls have been missed.  
 I would appreciate your immediate action to this urgent matter.  
 Regards  Bilal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...apos;font-kerning: none'>Honestly, Ive left my personal mobile at my home betw...
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Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...immediate action to this urgent matter.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3337.0 937.175257732 356% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 359.0 206.0 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.29526462396 4.54256449028 205% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.14735223519 2.54303337028 281% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.384401114206 0.622605031667 62% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 775.8 290.88556701 267% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.41237113402 156% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 16.3608247423 361% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 425.305935638 44.8134815571 949% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 556.166666667 76.5299724578 727% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.8333333333 16.8248392259 356% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0272499978516 0.216113520407 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414351437123 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470962032084 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0229764053341 0.12726935374 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265759727734 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.3 8.37731958763 624% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -39.17 70.7449484536 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 3.82989690722 598% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.4 7.45979381443 448% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 37.55 8.71597938144 431% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 80.0 8.62886597938 927% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 8.54432989691 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 8.15463917526 319% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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