You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you about some discrepancies related to my phone bill of last month.I have received a huge amount of bill and that too an international calls which I didn't make.I am an old customer of Tylenol company and I have never faced such kind of problem.
I am using your service for more than 7 years now.First,while going through the statement,it is showing the calls made to california thrice in the month of March.Secondly,these calls are made during an odd hours as per the statement.Surprisingly,neither I had an emergency during that period nor my family.Also,we don't have any relatives or friends residing in California who will call all of a sudden at night.This made me suspicious about the possibility of hacking.Therefore,I would like you to look into this matter immediately.This is definitely crucial for your company in future.
I want an immediate weaver without any delay. Also, an assurance that such kind of negligence will not happen again.
Looking for your positive response soon.
Yours sincerely,
Maria James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... related to my phone bill of last month.I have received a huge amount of bill and...
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...that too an international calls which I didnt make.I am an old customer of Tylenol co...
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...ave never faced such kind of problem. I am using your service for more than 7 y...
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... your service for more than 7 years now.First,while going through the statement,it is...
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...rgency during that period nor my family.Also,we dont have any relatives or friends r...
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...nd of negligence will not happen again. Looking for your positive response soon....
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...sitive response soon. Yours sincerely, Maria James
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... soon. Yours sincerely, Maria James
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14124293785 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75737223137 2.54303337028 148% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683615819209 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 204.093660417 44.8134815571 455% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.666666667 76.5299724578 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 16.8248392259 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 4.34317383033 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 2.54639175258 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311455734771 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117784603867 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102277896533 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161204549344 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103555282389 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 8.37731958763 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 8.62886597938 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.