Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Driving has always remained a fascinating thing for the people of every age group because it makes them to do myriad things in order to bring excitement as well as to fulfill their requirements. However, some hold the opinion that people of age group 18 should be allowed to drive a car, while others are not in favor of it. Thus, I am going to put forth my views over the requirement of this statement.
To begin with, former view can be supported on account of multifarious reasons. Firstly, adolescence is considered as a perfect age to comprehend about various things, because people grasp skills very swiftly during this time. Furthermore, it will be easier for youngsters to commute from one place to another, and thus they will be able to reach at their destination on time. On the top of that, driving can assist youngsters to reduce burden of their parents, because youngsters will be able to manage their work by own by going at any place easily, thereby there will be no disturbance to their parents in order to fulfill petty requirements of their children.
On the contrary, driving can result humongous predicaments for people, thus certain age such as not less than twenty five can be a viable owing to many fruitful reasons. Firstly, maturity and sense of responsibility come at a specific age and driving needs both the things because mature people are able to take better decisions in emergency situations such as flat tire while driving. In addition, drivers of this age will be more patient and will not indulge themselves in any road race with other cars while youngsters often get involve in car racing due to their aggression and immaturity which can result in accidents. For instance, it has been found that many young people end their life due to breakneck speed of vehicles, which indicate immaturity of young people.
In conclusion, It is an unequivocal that one should learn about any skill at the right time, which is more pertinent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'driving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: driving
...t people of age group 18 should allowed to drive a car, while others are not in favor of...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge such as not less than twenty-five can a practical owing to many fruitful reaso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91717791411 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68106758156 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8842235271 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.583333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217679389142 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836152986374 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862776875084 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132874193345 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060468354699 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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