Some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while others think that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views, give your opinion and relevant examples.

Essay topics:

Some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while others think that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views, give your opinion and relevant examples.

People have ushered into a world of technology and information, which somewhat has become an inevitable part of the human. However, modes of getting information have altered with respect to the time wherein radio and television are its peak. Now, I will highlight some points over both views of this statement.

To begin with, the news always remained a crucial part in human's development, and radio has proved its significance due to manifold reasons. Firstly, radio has made plausible for every common person to receive news in a best way because radio is reliable, economical, lightweight and most importantly, it furnishes accurate news about every corner of the world. On the top of that, one can conveniently carry radio at any place without any hassle, and it does not have any detrimental impact on the health of human, as people of every age group can easily get news from radio, which seems somewhat impossible in television.

However, life without television is unimaginable because television is not only a source of entertainment, but a medium of acquiring various news in a more practical way. Thus, it has more benefits as compare to radios on account of multifarious reasons. Firstly, television has made possible to not only hear audio, but also videos, whereby one gets comprehensive information about surrounding. Furthermore, television facilitates many young people to improve their personality by knowing different skills from television, which is again major contribution of television. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that students learn in a better way by watching things in a television, rather than just by a glimpse.

In conclusion, It is an unequivocal that both radio and television have its own importance, thus it is completely depend on human's usage.

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Average: 10 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...every average person to receive news in a best way because radio is reliable, eco...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...s own importance, thus it is completely depend on humans usage.
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...rtance, thus it is completely depend on humans usage.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20618556701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00748349224 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4919087495 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182783217221 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636445365692 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359222507193 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102743946081 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353918199994 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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