A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might me suitable for him.
Write a letter to this friend. in your letter
- tell your friend about the job and what short of work it involves
- Say why you think the job would be suitable for him
- explain how to apply for a job
Dear Rekha,
How are you doing, hope you are doing well and thanks for remembering me, as I have received your letter asking for a job opportunity in my country.
I am glad to tell you about an opportunity in my current organization. we have an open position in BT account and the designation is software Engineer. The roles and responsibilities would be coding, interacting with clients, getting the requirement and implementing them.
As soon as I see that in my company job posting website, I felt you are suitable for this. Because I have seen your coding skills when we were in college and the passion for the software development you had.
To apply for the said position, you just have to visit our company portal which is www.jobbank.com/apply. here you have search for a job code 1888 and the title you can find a software developer, click on the link and provide the necessary information and apply for it.
I will be waiting eagerly to see you here at earliest and All the very best for the interview.
Yours lovingly,
Bhanu
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-02 | bhanprakash23 | 73 | view |
| 2019-08-02 | bhanprakash23 | 67 | view |
| 2019-08-02 | bhanprakash23 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...opportunity in my current organization. we have an open position in BT account and...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
... portal which is www.jobbank.com/apply. here you have search for a job code 1888 and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74316939891 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02357188125 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8081649916 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427919639157 0.216113520407 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160937567785 0.0766984524023 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107623746067 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233717307004 0.12726935374 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121970944487 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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