The diagram below show how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The pictorial images illustrates manufacturing of various goods from leather.The process consists ten steps.

At the beginning,the animal skin extracted from various animal which are set in the open sunlight for drying and transported to the factory by van.In the first step,the animal skin dipped in the amalgamation of water and lime,due to the washing process the bacteria and germs are romoves from the fur. After that,the raw leather materials soak in the lime solution. Then flattering process done by huge roller machine which turn in to flat sheet.

Furthermore,the flat leather sheets passed from the another container which is contained with tannin chemical( water+vegetable matter) where soaking takes place. Followed by,the leather sheets are send for polishing where another roller machine removes the wrinkles,and leather sheets are ready for transporting to factory by loury. The machines are made handbag,ball and shoes from leather material.

Overall,the process starts with ectracted animal skin and finished with various good like ball and handbag. The process is complex, lengthy and machine made.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
The pictorial images illustrates manufacturing of various goods from lea...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...facturing of various goods from leather.The process consists ten steps. At the b...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... consists ten steps. At the beginning,the animal skin extracted from various anim...
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Suggestion: In
...g and transported to the factory by van.In the first step,the animal skin dipped i...
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Suggestion: , the
... to the factory by van.In the first step,the animal skin dipped in the amalgamation ...
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Suggestion: , due
...ed in the amalgamation of water and lime,due to the washing process the bacteria and...
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Suggestion: , the
...rms are romoves from the fur. After that,the raw leather materials soak in the lime ...
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...h turn in to flat sheet. Furthermore,the flat leather sheets passed from the ano...
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Suggestion: , the
...r where soaking takes place. Followed by,the leather sheets are send for polishing w...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...ace. Followed by,the leather sheets are send for polishing where another roller mach...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ther roller machine removes the wrinkles,and leather sheets are ready for transporti...
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Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , ball
... by loury. The machines are made handbag,ball and shoes from leather material. Ove...
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... shoes from leather material. Overall,the process starts with ectracted animal sk...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65680473373 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78096436932 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 74.3340807137 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0715844377537 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035657765024 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284233965092 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504060799189 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312520690596 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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