The provided images illustrate the life cycle of cotton T-shirt. The process consists twelve step.
The production of cotton T-shirt starts with cotton picker machine which harvested from the farm and make cotton bales. Following this, cotton bales are transported to the factory via truck or lorry. After that, automatic machine is converted cotton in to thread. In the next stage, the machine weaves thread and make cotton sheets which are used for T-shirt making. The design is drawn by worker on the T-shirt.
In the following stage, the T-shirt are transferred for the dying process where T-shirts are coloured by different shades. Than, the ready product is shifted to the packaging department, where T-shirts are packed in the boxes. Finally, the T-shirts are ready to sell in the shop and supermarket. The individual is purchased ready made T-shrt and after some time usage thrown in the garbage, fire or recycle bin.
Overall, the process is lengthy, complex and man-machine made. The cotton picker,design and recycle are three major stage. The main ingredient is cotton.
- The diagram below show how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant. 78
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a cotton T-shirt.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
...on T-shirt. The process consists twelve step. The production of cotton T-shirt st...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t. The process consists twelve step. The production of cotton T-shirt starts wit...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...hirts are coloured by different shades. Than, the ready product is shifted to the pa...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , design
... and man-machine made. The cotton picker,design and recycle are three major stage. The ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22857142857 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47215348576 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 0.824742268041 1455% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1045796231 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3571428571 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07142857143 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221093078698 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817118740735 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684059099232 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134799816858 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358883861372 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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