Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown In your letter say When is the best time to visit Recommend someplace to stay Invite her him to your house

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown. In your letter say
• When is the best time to visit
• Recommend someplace to stay
• Invite her/him to your house

Dear Tom,

I hope you’re doing well. I’m just writing to say I’m very happy that you’d want to come to visit Ho Chi Minh City next year.

You know, every year we celebrate Tet holiday in February and let me tell you, it’s extremely fun. So, it’ll be best if you visit the city during this time of year. It’d be even better if you’d come and enjoy the first 2 weeks of this month because the weather is always refreshing at the start of spring.

If you’re looking for a place to stay, I suggest The Grand Hotel in district 1. It’s located right in the center of the city so it’s very convenient to go around and explore downtown. What’s more, it’s rated 5 stars and recommended by many locals and travelers on Facebook.

That said, I’d be very happy if you’d want to stay at my home in district Tan Binh. I have 2 spare bedrooms for you and your family to stay in. We’ll also have a chance to hang out at night so I can show you around my friendly and peaceful neighborhood.

I look forward to hearing from you.

All the best,

Truong

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.685 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55905744367 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3913037157 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0769230769 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836531787878 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396663153084 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482287147172 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045443398963 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340936526981 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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