TPO 20 - Integrated
Whether it's true that forest fires like that occured in Yellowstone can have damages to the growing of the vegetations and plants and also can have a bad effect on animal lifes on that region, this fires have a lot of positive and constructive points to tell.
First of all, this fire can provide soil to have nutrients to grow new plants on that region. Moreover, it can provide new resources for new animal species like rabbits and hares. So when some sort of animals are dying throw this process, but new kind of them can live because of the high tempreture that brings new souce of foods for these species.
And at last, the arguments about damaging fires to the tourist attraction and the lack of businesses in order of this in not a big concern. Because this kind of fire doesn't take place every year (which it isn't occure for so much time in Yellowstone either) and can't be consider as a big trouble for tourism. After a year everything can go throw the as same as the old good days for local businesses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... big concern. Because this kind of fire doesnt take place every year which it isnt occ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...e doesnt take place every year which it isnt occure for so much time in Yellowstone ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... so much time in Yellowstone either and cant be consider as a big trouble for touris...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, kind of, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 1373.03311258 60% => OK
No of words: 186.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4623655914 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31787157022 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 419.366225166 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5698333703 49.2860985944 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06452816374 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169941907692 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083155471517 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307163262553 0.0662205650399 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120083548149 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236224691308 0.0443174109184 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 63.6247240618 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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