Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
There is no doubt that a community is standing on the working of all of its members and of the most valuable groups of them are young people. But how many of societies in these days can use from these pure source of work?
Unfortunately, progression of new technologies aren't always so useful. We can not disagree with the importance of the technology in our lives, but they are something that put an obstacle between people and the society. I'm supporting the idea that in these days, we couldn't see much young people that help the others as well before and this could be from not having the apropriate tools for how to work with new things.
When we want to talk about not having younger members of society as a helper, we have to question ourselves: where are they and what are they doing?
Personally when i go through the different activities that youngers take place, the only thing that could be observed is the shallowing works for having fun. Amenity is the main reason for them to take place in the works and with so much entertaining things like drinking in bars, go for music concerts and so many activities like these, there aren't enough time for doing public obligation.
Young people have so much energy but wasting their time using contents on internet and social madia, there isn't much time for them. probably the wrong way of having teaching the important activities for the community is one of the key factors that brings society to these amount of wastefulness.
It seems if we haven't a percise plan for managing this big part of the community, we can't find a solution in the close future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66550522648 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44912294659 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567944250871 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2304259364 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.727272727 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131810407345 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466606186513 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499187343139 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059435540649 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404006607808 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.