Some people feel that sports is beneficial to the society. Other, however believe that it is nothing but a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The rate at which countries regard sporting activities has tremendously increased. It is argued by some individuals that sports has a huge importance to the society whereas, others think that it is just a recreational activity on order to boost people's mood. In my opinion, I believe that it is of great importance as it will keep individuals physically fit and keeps the brain active.
Supporters of the view that sports should be seen as a leisure activity hold the belief probably because some of these activities seem not to be real to the spectators. Imagine! It is amazing how wrestlers like Roman Reign and Saint Lawrence give punches to each other without breaking down. Moreover, most people involve in these games too easy of stress and gain full relaxation. Thus, it is viewed as purely for entertainment.
Conversely, another group of people believe that sporting is of great gain to our societies and I agree. It keeps people physically strong. The bones and muscles are strengthened by exercise thereby making the public strong to Carry out there different tasks. Likewise, games helps to develop the brain. When this activity is going on, blood is pumped to the different parts of the brain which keeps the brain on it's optimum condition for effective learning. For example, a survey carried among school children aged 6 to 12 years in the year 2008 revealed that those who involve themselves in activities like football have a drastic improvement on how they memorize things.
In conclusion, although some people believe that sports is mainly for entertainment, others believe that it has a numerous benefits to the society. In my opinion, I agree with the latter as this can help to keep individuals strong as well as improve people's brain in recalling things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 124, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
..., others believe that it has a numerous benefits to the society. In my opinion, I agree ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, thus, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01677852349 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74805171126 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.036875291 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206231209623 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679868646357 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679687767893 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138517452483 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611851788821 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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